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Wide eyed and tie-dyed
Fade, to, the sky.

Fully fried and glassy-eyed
Smoke rising high.


And so do I,
In a relative way
Feeling a third sense
For the eighth time today

Emotions run rampant
And so do I,
Don't be such a downer
While i'm flying high

"I'm getting high,
With my kite..
yes.. my kite
heh heh, that's it...
Flying high with my kite
In my basement, that's right."

Tie-dyed and glassy-eyed
Reaching the brink of reality

Wide eyed and fully fried
Smoke rising high.

And so do I...
©2005-2009 ~quave
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This was fun to write, no I was not under any influences...

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:iconbadkhemmie:
I like this.

I mean, I like it a lot. The rhyming is clever, and the general theme is pretty fun (I might be setting a bad example?) Good work, and Yes, I am faving this. ^-^

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Read mine!

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Thanks Khem... I literally did write that in 5-10 minutes

Glad you enjoyed it :)
:icondjmors17:
That flows so smoothly... Wow... I see why you wanted me to read it... Kicks ass, my man.

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But you can only walk down one road, my friend...

You cannot be mad when the road you travelled ends up leading someplace you didn't want to go...

There are no maps in life...
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Glad you liked it... I gotta get my hands on an electric now...
:iconvampychicken:
Haha! Awesome. I really like it. ^-^

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Poodles beware: I have blasters and I'm looking for you.
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It's not an obsession, I just happen to have hundreds of dollars worth of manga. Ooh, special edition? :drool: M1N3!!!!! :reading:
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Thanks, and thanks for the +fav =)

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Floydians.
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:icongothic-anomie:
i like it. i suk at rhyming poetry, lol. but you do it so well!
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Thank you, I still write as easily as this came out

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Floydians.
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